Friday, March 2, 2012
AQWF Writing Response 1- Childhood vs. Adulthood Motifs
When we are young, we live in a world where we feel like we are unstoppable; able to conquer anything that comes towards us because we don’t have reasons to think otherwise. There are no reasons to believe that we will get burned by the hot stove as we inch our 5 year old fingers towards the red glow, or we never expect the outcome of just having our first drink at that party. But when we know the punishments, the scalding of the skin or the probation from basketball, we realize we will never make that decision again. In the novel, All Quiet on the Western Front, a group of young soldiers enter the war with a childlike, mind set of being unstoppable. But when they see what the war is really about they, “ distinguish the false from true, and suddenly learned to see” (6). Adulthood is not a time when you turn the famous 18 years, but is when you grow up; grow up from the view of innocence and protectiveness, because just like the war, life doesn’t a have a forgiving, childlike setting.
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Miranda, this was really good in explaining how the soldiers had to mature from boys to men. I liked the analogies that you had in the beginning because they really brought your idea together. There isn't anything that I thought really needed to change so good job!
ReplyDeleteWow I love this Miranda! I like how it's short, it only makes your point even more distinct. The only thing to change would be some of your wording--I got confused at points but it wasn't anything big. I love how you related it to real life situations because that made it easier for me to understand. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteMiranda, I really liked this! I loved the imagery and "show don't tell" at the beginning, it really described your ideas perfectly! I also loved some of your repetition, like in the second to last sentence; it added a really cool effect and got your point across nicely! If you had to change anything, I would agree with what Jennifer said, but those little parts didn't take away from the piece at all. I loved how relatable the topic was to both the novel, and our lives. Great job!
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